PLANNING 57 - AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

 

• First Title: Should be more conventional e.g. blood dripping from letter or static buzz.
• First Title: Too much font to read – should read it up to 2.5 seconds.
• Last Title: There should be a shot of the basement like a freeze frame, with Johnny’s voiceover saying ‘will you run into the realm of psychosis?’ because it is more engaging and adds to the intensity.