FEEDBACK
We showed our fellow peers both boys and girls to listen to our radio trailer and see what we did well and what could be improved.
THINGS TO IMPROVE:
- Firstly, they said that we should adjust the sounds of some of the noises so that they are equal and don't differentiate from one another too much.
- They also said to include a voice over so we could hear things about the story.
- Also said to perhaps add a different effect on to one of the lines that we said, 'will you run into the realm of psychosis' so that the audience are able to hear what is actually said.
THINGS WE DID WELL:
- Things that our audience liked were the psychotic noises that we used in the background which worked well with the theme of our story.
- Another thing that the audience liked about our radio trailer was the use of the piano in the background as it contrasted to the idea of something so elegant to be paired with a horror film.
- Lastly, on other aspect of our radio trailer that worked well was the way we said 'Perilous.. January 2015" as it suggested that perhaps our actor is running away from something which is why it sounds out of breath. However this works well as although Jake seems like his running from something, it is actually his own mind which plays well with our story line.
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